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Original Deck
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A hay or not a hay?
Well, I built this deck as soon as I got enough of the cards I needed
Pokemon: 25
4 mochop
3 mochoke
4 rattata
3 raticate
4 bellsprout
3 wepingbell
4 Buzz
Trainers: 8
4 Chaos gym
2 computer search
2 Pokemon Traders
Energy: 27
5 Lightning Energy
11 Grass energy
11 Fighting Energy
The point of this deck is to get out chaos gym as soon as possible. With 2
Computer Search and 4 Chaos gyms, it its highly likley that you get Chaos gym
on turn 2. Once you get Chaos gym, use your opponents trainers to have
deckdrawing ability to get all those stage 1 cards out. Then, Attack with
full force!
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Deck Fix
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Deck Focus
Definately a problem here. You're trying to run 3 evolution lines with only 8 trainers, and that certainly won't work. Raticate, machoke, and weepinbell all won't fit into the same deck like that.
Pokemon
Okay, this needs quite a bit of remodeling. Drop the machokes - with raticate dealing a bunch of damage and weepinbell finishing off, with the support of buzz, machoke really won't be a huge help. Add in another Raticate and Weepinbell.
Energy
This is WAY too much energy. Drop the fighting energy, and add in another 3 lightning, and take out a grass.
Trainers
Well 14 spots are now open and your in need of trainer help :). Add in 2 computer searches and pokemon traders to get some searching going. Now add 4 oaks. This will give you some card drawing you need. Add in 4 item finders to get back trainers and 2 garbage runs to shuffle your evolutions back into your deck.
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Final Deck
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Pokemon: 20
4 rattata
4 raticate
4 bellsprout
4 wepingbell
4 Buzz
Trainers: 22
4 Chaos gym
4 computer search
4 Pokemon Traders
4 Professor Oak
4 Item Finder
2 Nightly Garbage Run
Energy: 18
8 Lightning Energy
10 Grass energy
Good luck with the deck!