>Hi this is my deck its main purpose is too poison the defending pokémon
>while using Potions and Super Potions to keep your pokémon in the game.
>
>-Oh My God They Poisoned Kenny!-
>
>Pokémon (17)
>2 Weezing (Fossil)Obvious
>4 Koffing (Base)So I can posion or paralyze GAURANTEED
>2 Jigglypuff (Just there for Mime)
>2 Venonat (for Venomoth)
>2 Venomoth
>3 Grimer (TR)
>2 Dark Muk (guranteed poison)
>
>Trainers 22
>2 Trader
>3 Plus Power (the pokémon that have weak moves)
>3 Super Potion (Low HP)
>4 N.G.R (low Hp again)
>4 Potion (Low HP)
>2 G.O.W (get out the weak pokes)
>4 Oak
>
>Energy 21
>
>18 Grass
>2 Potion Energy
>1 Full Heal
>
>Please Fix this deck
***
Basically, this is another status effect deck. Nothing really groundbreaking or
new, so let's just get you tuned up and send you on your way.
1) You want to go down to 2 evolution families. What to drop? Well, I hesitate
at dropping Venomoth, so let's assume that he's going to remain. Of the two
psychic-weak families, then, one must go. I think here I'd rather have Dark Muk
for funky Power and automatic poison, even though Koffing would be neat to have.
Why don't you set Dark Muk at 4-3 and Venomoth at 3-2. Now you want basics to
round out your force. Scyther is a given, but let's only run 3 to avoid
exacerbating your fighting weakness. We do want a bit of protection against
psychic. Normally I'd recommend Kangaskhan, but here I'm not sure it works so
well. I think Jiggly might be a better choice due to lower retreat and
auto-sleep. Go with the little poofball. After that's done, your Pokemon should
be nicely rounded out.
2) Good Lord. You are compulsive about keeping your Pokemon safe, aren't you?
Ehh, I think a better strategy would be to yank the various potion-type trainers
and replace them with the equivalent Removal. Energy Removal will also help keep
your Poke safe from harm and has the benefit of being able to prevent damage
BEFORE it occurs. Remember, when given a choice between an active and a passive
option, always play actively (all other things being equal.) Yank Trader for
Computer Search, drop an NGR and an Oak to squeeze in some Bills, and cram an
Item Finder in there some way--probably at the expense of energy, since this
deck needs very little energy and you've already got NGR.
3) 20 energy should cut it fine for you. 16 Grass and 4 DCE should round you out
nicely. I wouldn't mess around with those funky Rocket energies right now,
unless there's something I don't know about.
***
17 Pokemon:
4 Grimer
3 Dark Muk
3 Venonat
2 Venomoth
3 Scyther
2 Jigglypuff
23 Trainers:
2 Computer Search
3 Bill
3 Oak
1 Item Finder
3 Energy Removal
3 SER
3 PlusPower
2 Gust of Wind
3 Nightly Garbage Run
20 Energy:
16 Grass Energy
4 DCE
***
Now that we've eliminated a family and tuned your trainers up a bit, the deck
should run smoother. See you around.
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