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Hello Satoshi,help me to fix my deck and please reveiw it,I know you are the greater deck fixer in the pojo, Thank you
Pokemon(20)
4 Abra(TR)
3 Alakazam
3 Chansey
2 Mr mime
2 Gastly(fossil)
1 Haunter(fossil)
3 Psyduck(fossil)
2 Dark Goldduck

Trainer(20)
4 Pokemon Center
2 Nishtly Garbage Run
4 Bill
2 Gust
2 No Removal Gym
3 Scoop Up
3 Computer Search
3 Breeder

Energy(20)
16 Psychic
4  Double Colourless Energy
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Overview

If you're one of the more alert Pojo visitors, you probably noticed that, contrary to the introduction in this person's deck, I am not Satoshi ;). You see, as a new feature in the Garage, each mechanic will do a fix of his/her own, and one from another mechanic. This gives you more than one perspective on how to fix it, and more than one person's viewpoint. You can find Satoshi's fix of this deck at Satoshi's Shop.

The deck itself is already done pretty well. You have the basics down; multiples, not way too many evolutions, a pretty good Trainer mix... You could still use some tweaking, though. One critical thing you lack is Professor Oak (yes, even in a stall), and you shouldn't have a 2/1 family.

Pok閙on

This is a pretty classic Alakazam stall. Integral parts are the Alakazam family, Mr. Mime, and Chansey, which you already have. Fossil Haunter is also good for stalling, with a defensive power, a cheap, stalling attack, and a free retreat cost. Scyther would fit nicely also because of his Colorless attack, high HP, and free retreat. Dark Golduck is a good family, but I don't think it really fits here; I'd take them out for more of the Haunter line. Let's go with something like this:
4 Abra(TR)
4 Alakazam
3 Chansey
3 Mr mime
3 Gastly(fossil)
2 Haunter(fossil)
2 Scyther

Trainers

You've done pretty well here too... Since it's a stall you'll need Healing Trainers like Scoop and Center. Nightly Garbage Run is good too. You do need card drawing though, although not as much as a regular deck. Not too many changes needed here, but I'd go with this:
4 Pokemon Center
3 Nightly Garbage Run
2 Item Finder
3 Professor Oak
3 Scoop Up
3 Computer Search
4 Breeder

Energy

You shouldn't need a lot if it's a stall. Your Pokemon won't really attack much- ideally Mr Mime does the dirty work while Alakazam moves the damage to Chansey, which is eventually healed. Or Chansey can scrunch for awhile, or you could stall by sleep with Haunter. None of these take much Energy, though. Let's go with 14 Psychic and three Double Colorless (for Scyther and Chansey, and retreating Alakazam in the event of a GOW).
Pokemon (21)
4 Abra(TR)
4 Alakazam
3 Chansey
3 Mr mime
3 Gastly(fossil)
2 Haunter(fossil)
2 Scyther

Trainer (22)
4 Pokemon Center
3 Nightly Garbage Run
2 Item Finder
3 Professor Oak
3 Scoop Up
3 Computer Search
4 Breeder

Energy (17)
14 Psychic
3 Double Colourless Energy

The hardest part should be setting up, because once You get established it can be hard for 
your opponent to make a comeback without decking himself.  Hope that helps, and good luck!



~ Souper ~