I have sent this deck to ProfPoke but everyone one is sending him their stuff,

so i wont get it back in time for the Diagon Alley demo. Please help me.!!!

I think this deck needs some work. So i am turning to u for your 110% criticall
thinking on this one! Please help me out!

POTIONS- 14

CHARMS- 11

STARTER- Professor Severus Snape

EXTRA CHARACTER- Hermione Granger

SPELLS-
4 Magical Mishaps
3 Toe Biter
1 Confundus
1 Blubell Flames
1 Wingardium Leviosa
2 Noxious Poison
3 Boil Cure
2 Foul Brew
1 Malevolent Mixture
2 Hospital Wing
2 Snape's Question
3 Pomfrey's Pick-Me-Up
1 Dogbreath Potion
1 Forgetfulness Potion
1 Potions Exam
1 Erumpent Potion

ITEMS-
1 Phoenix Feather Wand
1 Dragon Heart Wand
2 Pewter Cauldron
1 Silver Cauldron

Please try to think this over hard. I need a good defense against creatures, a good one,
and i also need a way to deal more damage quicker. Most people use care of magical
creatures in their decks, so most will expect me to have it. Whichs means that some of
their cards will be useless, which gets them angry and confused, blurs their mind, so that
they mess up, and i go in for the kill!! Hopefully anyway! Any help is gravely appreciated!
Thank You Everyone For your Help!

~Master Wizard Potter~





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Cool deck, MWP. Don't worry, I give deck fixes a good amount of thought.

First, let's look at the characters:

STARTER- Professor Severus Snape
EXTRA CHARACTER- Hermione Granger

I'm not sure if you know, but you can have more than one of the same character in your deck,
but you can't play the same character twice. Hermione Granger isn't as powerful as an extra
character, she's much more help as a starter. Snape is not a bad choice, but Flitwick is a
little better for this kind of deck. It saves a lot of space, since you won't need any more
Charms lessons, since you only need one of that lesson to play that type of spell or item,
which Flitwick provides. At first glance at the Snape card, one could argue that Snape would
also eliminate the need for Potions lessons. But with good Potions spells like Draught of The
Living Dead and Dogbreath Potion that requires you to discard Potions lessons, Potion lessons
are still very much needed. Snape is still powerful, however with a nice ability that can
decide matches and it provides an ever-sweet Potions lesson.

+1 Snape(extra)
+1 Flitwick(starter)
-1 Hermione Granger

Now, to the Spells. Your choices are a little out of focus. Let's try to put it together:

+3 Stupefy
+3 Vermilious
+1 Toe Biter
+3 Burning Bitteroot Balm
+2 Malevolent Mixture
+2 Dogbreath Potion
+2 Snape's Question
-1 Potions Exam
-2 Foul Brew
-1 Erumpent Potion
-1 Pomfrey's Pick-Me-Up
-4 Magical Mishap
-1 Bluebell Flames
-1 Confundus
-3 Boil Cure
Whew! That should do it. Vermilious is good against most creatures, and can even be put into
direct damage. Snape's Question and Magical Mishap is good, but you should stick to one.
Snape's Question seems better for a powerful deck like this. Stupefy is a great late game
card(as well as mid-game), and can be comboed with Flitwick to put it in your hand when you
need it most. If you're having trouble finishing off your opponent, or struggling with damage,
the Malevolent Mixture will help you a lot. In tight spots you could use Burning Bitteroot
Balm to turn the tables. Snape's ability works well too.

I see that you don't have any adventures, and you should in a deck like this.

+3 Unusual Pets


If your opponent has a creature deck, use it to your advantage with Unusual Pets, keeping
steady damage while building lessons up for expensive spells.

Now for the items:

+3 Borrowed Wand
-1 Pheonix Feather Wand
-1 Dragon Heart String Wand
-1 Silver Cauldron

They'll help you to be able to play the expensive costs for spells.

Just the lessons left:

+10 Potions
-11 Charms

OK, so that's it. Here's the fixed version of the deck:

Potions-Charms deck

>>Characters
1 Flitwick
2 Snape

>>Spells
3 Stupefy
4 Toe Biter
3 Vermilious
3 Burning Bitteroot Balm
4 Malevolent Mixture
3 Dogbreath Potion
2 Hospital Wing
4 Snape's Question
2 Pomfrey's Pick-Me-Up

>>Items
3 Borrowed Wand

>>Adventures
3 Unusual Pets

Lessons>>
24 Potions

This deck will be sure to impress at the Diagon Alley Demo, and put you ahead of
everyone else(hopefully ;x).

Hope this helps,
Professor Lupin